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Re: [Jmap] Deb Cooley's No Objection on draft-ietf-jmap-sharing-08: (with COMMENT)

Deb Cooley <debcooley1@gmail.com> Thu, 18 April 2024 11:30 UTC

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From: Deb Cooley <debcooley1@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 18 Apr 2024 07:30:08 -0400
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Subject: Re: [Jmap] Deb Cooley's No Objection on draft-ietf-jmap-sharing-08: (with COMMENT)
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TY!

On Thu, Apr 18, 2024 at 2:07 AM Neil Jenkins <neilj@fastmailteam.com> wrote:

> Hi Deb,
>
> Thanks for your feedback.
>
> General, nit:  I'm personally not a fan of the tagging in the text version
> to
> signal bold and italic text in the html version.  Especially when it occurs
> adjacent to formal naming/format language.
>
>
> I agree, and will talk to the RFC editors about the best way to handle
> this.
>
> General, very small nit:  A mix of Principal and principal occur
> throughout the
> document.  Pick one.  (I'm assuming the RFC editor will flag this)
>
>
> I have published an updated draft
> <https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-jmap-sharing-09.html> that
> fixes this.
>
> Cheers,
> Neil.
>

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