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Re: [Json] I-D Action: draft-ietf-jsonbis-rfc7159bis-02.txt

"Joe Hildebrand (jhildebr)" <jhildebr@cisco.com> Thu, 16 June 2016 16:16 UTC

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From: "Joe Hildebrand (jhildebr)" <jhildebr@cisco.com>
To: Tim Bray <tbray@textuality.com>, "json@ietf.org" <json@ietf.org>
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On 6/15/16, 9:46 PM, "json on behalf of Tim Bray" <json-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of tbray@textuality.com> wrote:

>Two questions for the WG:
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>1. In section 1.2, first sentence, should “describes” be “described”?

“described”, in my opinion.

Change 4627 to 7159?

>2. 2nd last para of 1.2 has the word “should” in lower case - using 2119 words in lower case is apt to draw objections.  But can we say SHOULD when we're talking about another organization?

Change “should” to “will”?

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Joe Hildebrand

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