Re: [kitten] Éric Vyncke's Abstain on draft-ietf-kitten-krb-spake-preauth-11: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>
To: Greg Hudson <ghudson@mit.edu>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
CC: "draft-ietf-kitten-krb-spake-preauth@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-kitten-krb-spake-preauth@ietf.org>, "kitten-chairs@ietf.org" <kitten-chairs@ietf.org>, "kitten@ietf.org" <kitten@ietf.org>, Nicolas Williams <nico@cryptonector.com>
Thread-Topic: Éric Vyncke's Abstain on draft-ietf-kitten-krb-spake-preauth-11: (with COMMENT)
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Greg

Thanks for your reply. All your suggested changes do make sense.

Regards

-éric

On 18/01/2024, 18:49, "Greg Hudson" <ghudson@mit.edu <mailto:ghudson@mit.edu>> wrote:


On 1/17/24 05:39, Éric Vyncke via Datatracker wrote:
> ## Section 1.2
> 
> `this pre-authentication mechanism`, which one is this ? I guess the Kerberos
> one but it may be worth being clear on "this".


The ID under consideration is wholly devoted to defining a new Kerberos 
pre-authentication mechanism, and that new mechanism is the referent of 
"this pre-authentication mechanism".


The draft currently uses that phrase six times. I will change each use 
to "the SPAKE pre-authentication mechanism", _except_ for this first 
one, because the resulting sentence would be awkward: "SPAKE was 
selected for the SPAKE pre-authentication mechanism for the following 
properties". However, I will change "SPAKE was selected" to "SPAKE is 
selected" to make it clear that the sentence is not a historical statement.


(While considering this comment, I noticed that the ID title was just 
"SPAKE pre-authentication". I will change it to "Kerberos SPAKE 
Pre-Authentication".)


> ## Section 1.3
> 
> Suggest to expand "OTP" at first use.


It's only used the once, so I will expand it to "One-Time Password" and 
dispense with the acronym.