[L2sm] [Errata Held for Document Update] RFC8466 (6555)

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The following errata report has been held for document update 
for RFC8466, "A YANG Data Model for Layer 2 Virtual Private Network (L2VPN) Service Delivery". 

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6555

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Status: Held for Document Update
Type: Editorial

Reported by: Mohamed Boucadair <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>
Date Reported: 2021-04-23
Held by: Robert Wilton (IESG)

Section: 8

Original Text
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                container vxlan {
                  when "derived-from-or-self(../type, "
                     + "'l2vpn-svc:vxlan')" {
                    description
                      "Only applies when the type of the tagged
                       interface is 'vxlan'.";
                  }
                  if-feature "vxlan";
                  leaf vni-id {
                    type uint32;
                    mandatory true;
                    description
                      "VXLAN Network Identifier (VNI).";
                  }
                  leaf peer-mode {
                    type identityref {
                      base vxlan-peer-mode;
                    }
                    default "static-mode";
                    description
                      "Specifies the VXLAN access mode.  By default,
                       the peer mode is set to 'static-mode'.";
                  }
                  list peer-list {
                    key "peer-ip";
                    leaf peer-ip {
                      type inet:ip-address;
                      description
                        "Peer IP.";
                    }
                    description
                      "List of peer IP addresses.";
                  }
                  description
                    "QinQ.";
                }

Corrected Text
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                container vxlan {
                  when "derived-from-or-self(../type, "
                     + "'l2vpn-svc:vxlan')" {
                    description
                      "Only applies when the type of the tagged
                       interface is 'vxlan'.";
                  }
                  if-feature "vxlan";
                  leaf vni-id {
                    type uint32;
                    mandatory true;
                    description
                      "VXLAN Network Identifier (VNI).";
                  }
                  leaf peer-mode {
                    type identityref {
                      base vxlan-peer-mode;
                    }
                    default "static-mode";
                    description
                      "Specifies the VXLAN access mode.  By default,
                       the peer mode is set to 'static-mode'.";
                  }
                  list peer-list {
                    key "peer-ip";
                    leaf peer-ip {
                      type inet:ip-address;
                      description
                        "Peer IP.";
                    }
                    description
                      "List of peer IP addresses.";
                  }
                  description
                    "Container for VXLAN.";
                }

Notes
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The description should refer to VXLAN not QinQ.

AD Note: This errata is correct, but YANG modules cannot be fixed as part of the errata process.  A new YANG module revision needs to be published so I have put this errata into "Held for Document Update" state.

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RFC8466 (draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-10)
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Title               : A YANG Data Model for Layer 2 Virtual Private Network (L2VPN) Service Delivery
Publication Date    : October 2018
Author(s)           : B. Wen, G. Fioccola, Ed., C. Xie, L. Jalil
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : L2VPN Service Model
Area                : Operations and Management
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG