[L2sm] [Errata Held for Document Update] RFC8466 (5921)

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Subject: [L2sm] [Errata Held for Document Update] RFC8466 (5921)
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The following errata report has been held for document update 
for RFC8466, "A YANG Data Model for Layer 2 Virtual Private Network (L2VPN) Service Delivery". 

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5921

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Status: Held for Document Update
Type: Technical

Reported by: Alexander ("Sasha") Vainshtein <alexander.vainshtein@ecitele.com>
Date Reported: 2019-11-27
Held by: Robert Wilton (IESG)

Section: 8

Original Text
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identity vpws-evpn {
    base service-type;
    description
      "VPWS service type using Ethernet VPNs (EVPNs)
       as specified in RFC 7432.";
  

  identity pbb-evpn {
   base service-type;
    description
      "Provider Backbone Bridge (PBB) service type using
       EVPNs as specified in RFC 7432.";
}

Corrected Text
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identity vpws-evpn {
    base service-type;
    description
      "VPWS service type using Ethernet VPNs (EVPNs)
       as specified in RFC 8214.";
  

  identity pbb-evpn {
   base service-type;
    description
      "Provider Backbone Bridge (PBB) service type using
       EVPNs as specified in RFC 7623.";
}

Notes
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Neither VPWS-EVPN nor PBB-EVPN are mentioned in RFC 7432. 
The former is defined in RFC 8214, and the latter - in RFC 7623.

Please note also that RFC 7623 is  not mentioned as one of the references.

AD Note: I agree with this errata, but given the change is within a YANG module, it needs a new revision of that YANG module to be published.  Hence, I've moved this errata to "Held for Document Update".

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RFC8466 (draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-10)
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Title               : A YANG Data Model for Layer 2 Virtual Private Network (L2VPN) Service Delivery
Publication Date    : October 2018
Author(s)           : B. Wen, G. Fioccola, Ed., C. Xie, L. Jalil
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : L2VPN Service Model
Area                : Operations and Management
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG

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