[L2sm] [Errata Held for Document Update] RFC8466 (6703)

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The following errata report has been held for document update 
for RFC8466, "A YANG Data Model for Layer 2 Virtual Private Network (L2VPN) Service Delivery". 

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6703

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Status: Held for Document Update
Type: Editorial

Reported by: Mohamed Boucadair <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>
Date Reported: 2021-10-05
Held by: Rob Wilton (IESG)

Section: 8

Original Text
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                  leaf pbs {
                    type uint64;
                    units "bps";
                    description
                      "Peak Burst Size.  It is measured in bytes per
                       second.";
                  }

Corrected Text
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                  leaf pbs {
                    type uint64;
                    units "Bytes per Second";
                    description
                      "Peak Burst Size.";
                  }

Notes
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There is a mismatch between the units statement and the description text. 

The corrected text assumes that the description reflects the intent. This is the meaning assumed in draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm

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RFC8466 (draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-10)
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Title               : A YANG Data Model for Layer 2 Virtual Private Network (L2VPN) Service Delivery
Publication Date    : October 2018
Author(s)           : B. Wen, G. Fioccola, Ed., C. Xie, L. Jalil
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : L2VPN Service Model
Area                : Operations and Management
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG