[L2sm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8466 (6555)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8466, "A YANG Data Model for Layer 2 Virtual Private Network (L2VPN) Service Delivery". -------------------------------------- You may review the report below and at: https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6555 -------------------------------------- Type: Editorial Reported by: Mohamed Boucadair <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> Section: 8 Original Text ------------- container vxlan { when "derived-from-or-self(../type, " + "'l2vpn-svc:vxlan')" { description "Only applies when the type of the tagged interface is 'vxlan'."; } if-feature "vxlan"; leaf vni-id { type uint32; mandatory true; description "VXLAN Network Identifier (VNI)."; } leaf peer-mode { type identityref { base vxlan-peer-mode; } default "static-mode"; description "Specifies the VXLAN access mode. By default, the peer mode is set to 'static-mode'."; } list peer-list { key "peer-ip"; leaf peer-ip { type inet:ip-address; description "Peer IP."; } description "List of peer IP addresses."; } description "QinQ."; } Corrected Text -------------- container vxlan { when "derived-from-or-self(../type, " + "'l2vpn-svc:vxlan')" { description "Only applies when the type of the tagged interface is 'vxlan'."; } if-feature "vxlan"; leaf vni-id { type uint32; mandatory true; description "VXLAN Network Identifier (VNI)."; } leaf peer-mode { type identityref { base vxlan-peer-mode; } default "static-mode"; description "Specifies the VXLAN access mode. By default, the peer mode is set to 'static-mode'."; } list peer-list { key "peer-ip"; leaf peer-ip { type inet:ip-address; description "Peer IP."; } description "List of peer IP addresses."; } description "Container for VXLAN."; } Notes ----- The description should refer to VXLAN not QinQ. Instructions: ------------- This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. -------------------------------------- RFC8466 (draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-10) -------------------------------------- Title : A YANG Data Model for Layer 2 Virtual Private Network (L2VPN) Service Delivery Publication Date : October 2018 Author(s) : B. Wen, G. Fioccola, Ed., C. Xie, L. Jalil Category : PROPOSED STANDARD Source : L2VPN Service Model Area : Operations and Management Stream : IETF Verifying Party : IESG
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