[L2tpext] draft-ietf-l2tpext-tdm-05

Hi Sasha,
This last rev has been a big improvement. Thanks for your work!

I have just a few more editorial changes:

* Section 2, last paragraph (page 3)

OLD: There are two new AVPs for the Session Connection Messages.
                                            ^^^^^^^^^^ ^
NEW: There are two new AVPs for the Session Management messages.
                                            ^^^^^^^^^^ ^

* Section 2.1, page 4:

OLD:
     a) The specified value MUST be an integer multiple of
        number of DS0 channels in the corresponding attachment
        circuit.
NEW:
     a) The specified value MUST be an integer multiple of the
                                                           ^^^
        number of DS0 channels in the corresponding attachment
        circuit.

* Section 2.2, page 5:
OLD:  PT is the payload type expected in the RTP header.  Value of zero
                                                          ^
NEW:  PT is the payload type expected in the RTP header.  A value of zero
                                                          ^^^

* Section 3, 2nd bullet point under "CESoPSN basic" (page 7):

   s/teh/the/

* IANA Considerations:
  Just to make it clear to everyone involved, you may want to separate
  the lonely return code from the list of return/error codes and make
  two lists: a return code list (one item) and an error code list (with
  the 5 items).

The text looks reasonably solid to me, so I believe we are ready
for WGLC.

Thanks again for the effort that you have put into this work.

Cheers,
-Ignacio

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