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Re: WG adoption call for draft-allan-l2vpn-spbm-evpn

Sriganesh Kini <sriganesh.kini@ericsson.com> Wed, 02 October 2013 22:30 UTC

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Subject: Re: WG adoption call for draft-allan-l2vpn-spbm-evpn
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Support.

A few comments
1. In the title instead of 802.1aq use the more easily understandable
"Shortest path bridging (802.1aq)" and be specific if it is only for the
MAC mode.
2. Abstract is a very long sentence (with multiple uses of "in a way").
Break this up into shorter sentences.
3. Figure 1 is split across pages boundaries. Should be on one page.
4. Should reference to draft-l2vpn-pbb-evpn-02 should be
draft-ietf-l2vpn-pbb-evpn ? It also seems to be pointing to an incorrect
reference [8]

- Sri


On Mon, Sep 30, 2013 at 10:51 AM, Giles Heron <giles.heron@gmail.com> wrote:

> This is a request to gauge consensus as to whether:
>
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-allan-l2vpn-spbm-evpn-04
>
> should be accepted as an L2VPN WG draft.
>
> please review the draft and respond to the list by Monday 14th October
> with comments as to its suitability, or not, for WG adoption.
>
> Nabil & Giles

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