Re: [Lager] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7940 (5987)

Asmus Freytag <asmus@unicode.org> Wed, 26 February 2020 11:37 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Lager] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7940 (5987)
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Correct, "or" not "of"

On 2/21/2020 7:47 PM, RFC Errata System wrote:
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7940,
> "Representing Label Generation Rulesets Using XML".
>
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> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5987
>
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> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: KIM Kyongsok <gimgs0@gmail.com>
>
> Section: 5.3.1
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> Original Text
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>     Variant code points are specified using one of more "var" elements as
>     children of a "char" element.
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>     Variant code points are specified using one or more "var" elements as
>     children of a "char" element.
>
> Notes
> -----
> Based on the context, "or or more" seems correct, NOT "one of more".
>
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> RFC7940 (draft-ietf-lager-specification-13)
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> Title               : Representing Label Generation Rulesets Using XML
> Publication Date    : August 2016
> Author(s)           : K. Davies, A. Freytag
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Label Generation Rules
> Area                : Applications and Real-Time
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG

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Re: [Lager] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7940 (… Asmus Freytag