Re: [Lager] AD review of draft-ietf-lager-specification-10

"Marc Blanchet" <marc.blanchet@viagenie.ca> Sun, 13 March 2016 19:46 UTC

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To: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
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On 13 Mar 2016, at 10:57, Barry Leiba wrote:

> Hi, authors, shepherd, and working group.
> Here's my AD review of draft-ietf-lager-specification-10.
>
> I have a lot of comments, but most are just editorial things that I'd
> like you to consider, but that won't delay last call.  I'm putting the
> few substantive questions up here, and I'd like them answered before
> we do last call.  Any other comments you can address before last call,
> or in parallel with it.
>
> ------------------------
>
> These are the questions/comments that I'd like addressed now:

responding to one of them.

…
> -- Section 11.1 --
> I'm amazed at how many drafts cite RFC 6838, but have not updated
> their registration template to conform with it.  Please see RFC 6838,
> Section 5.6, and make sure your template includes everything from
> there.  Please also post the updated template and draft name to the
> <media-types@ietf.org>

already done. got some comments. comments incorporated in this version 
of the draft.


Marc.