Re: [Lager] AD review of draft-ietf-lager-specification-10
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Subject: Re: [Lager] AD review of draft-ietf-lager-specification-10
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Kim, two items I am passing to you: On 3/14/2016 11:05 AM, Barry Leiba wrote: >> -- Section 5.3.5 -- >> > >> > Two contexts may be complementary, as in the following example, which >> > shows ARABIC LETTER TEH MARBUTA (U+0629) as a variant of ARABIC >> > LETTER ALEF MAKSURA (U+0649), but with two different types. >> > >> > <char cp="0647" > >> > <var cp="0629" not-when="arabic-final" type="blocked" /> >> > <var cp="0629" when="arabic-final" type="allocatable" /> >> > </char> >> > >> >There's an error here: the text says "ALEF MAKSURA (U+0649)", but the >> >example says "<char cp="0647" >" >> > >> >==> changed 0649 to 0647 > Is that the right direction? Unicode says that U+0647 is ARABIC > LETTER HEH, and that U+0649 is ARABIC LETTER ALEF MAKSURA. From the Root zone LGR: <char cp="0629" tag="sc:Arab" ref="0 100"> <var cp="0647" type="allocatable" comment="In the Arabic language, U+0647 HEH may be substituted for U+0629 TEH MARBUTA. [RFC 6365]" /> so it should be U+0647 and ARABIC LETTER HEH...I missed fixing the name. Kim, can you make this change? (aside: the root zone LGR gave up on this kind of mutually-exclusive conditional context for positional variants because we found the task of verifying them mechanically to be intractable in the general case - however, there are different types of contexts in other scripts that are much more straightforward and that aren't as problematic, hence the warning instead of a request to remove the feature.) > >> >-- Section 5.5 -- >> > >> > Formally, it MUST correspond to >> > the XML 1.0 Nmtoken (Name token) production. >> > >> >Because conforming to Nmtoken is a requirement, it would be good to >> >have a citation to where in the XML spec Nmtoken is defined. >> > >> >==> not done - could use help locating > Sure: > NEW > Formally, it MUST correspond to the XML 1.0 Nmtoken (Name token) > production (see [XML] Section 2.3). > END Kim, can you make that change? A./
- [Lager] AD review of draft-ietf-lager-specificati… Barry Leiba
- Re: [Lager] AD review of draft-ietf-lager-specifi… Marc Blanchet
- Re: [Lager] AD review of draft-ietf-lager-specifi… Asmus Freytag
- Re: [Lager] AD review of draft-ietf-lager-specifi… Martin J. Dürst
- [Lager] Fwd: AD review of draft-ietf-lager-specif… Asmus Freytag
- Re: [Lager] AD review of draft-ietf-lager-specifi… Barry Leiba
- Re: [Lager] AD review of draft-ietf-lager-specifi… Barry Leiba
- Re: [Lager] AD review of draft-ietf-lager-specifi… Asmus Freytag
- Re: [Lager] AD review of draft-ietf-lager-specifi… Kim Davies
- Re: [Lager] AD review of draft-ietf-lager-specifi… Marc Blanchet
- Re: [Lager] AD review of draft-ietf-lager-specifi… Alexey Melnikov