Re: [Lager] [media-types] media-type registration request review

Martin J. Dürst <duerst@it.aoyama.ac.jp> Mon, 07 March 2016 05:07 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Lager] [media-types] media-type registration request review
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On 2016/03/05 04:23, Mark Baker wrote:
> Hi,
>
> On Tue, Mar 1, 2016 at 1:39 PM, Marc Blanchet <marc.blanchet@viagenie.ca> wrote:
>> Hello,
>>   draft-ietf-lager-specification requests the registration of a new
>> media-type. The document has passed WGLC and we would like to have a review
>> of the request. Herein the extract of the media-type form from the draft.
>> Thanks in advance for the review
>>
>> Marc, lager wg co-chair
>>
>> <extract>
>> 11.1.  Media Type Registration
>>
>>     The media type "application/lgr+xml" should be registered to denote
>>     transmission of label generation rulesets that are compliant with
>>     this specification, in accordance with [RFC6838].
>>
>>     Type name: application
>>
>>     Subtype name: lgr+xml
>>
>>     Required parameters: None.
>>
>>     Optional parameters: charset (as for application/xml per [RFC7303])
>>
>>     Security considerations: As for application/xml per [RFC7303]
>
> I suggesting moving section 12 of the draft here.

I don't think that's necessary, and it would remove the "Security 
Considerations" section that's needed in every RFC. I'd suggest to 
replace "As for application/xml per [RFC7303]" with something such as
"See the security considerations for application/xml in [RFC7303] and 
the specific security considerations for Label Generation Rulesets in 
XML in RFC XXXX (RFC Editor/IANA, please replace XXXX with the final 
number of this document)".

>>     Interoperability considerations: As for application/xml per [RFC7303]
>>
>>     Published specification: This document.

The template will be stored independently of the containing RFC, so 
instead of "This document", use something like "RFC XXXX (RFC 
Editor/IANA, please replace XXXX with the final number of this document)

Regards,   Martin.

>>     Applications which use this media type: Software using label
>>     generation rulesets, including registry applications and client
>>     validators.
>
> Can you be more specific, as the registry information will be stored
> and viewed out of the context of the LAGER WG. Maybe "Software using
> IDNA label generation rulesets"? That's just a guess on my part, as
> I'm not very familiar with nomenclature in that space.
>
>>     Additional information: None.
>>
>>     Magic number: None.
>>
>>     File extension: .lgr or .xml
>
> .xml is associated with application/xml so I'd just stick with .lgr.
>
> Looks good otherwise.
>
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