Re: [Last-Call] Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-10

Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@futurewei.com> Fri, 21 October 2022 16:46 UTC

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From: Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@futurewei.com>
To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>, "ops-dir@ietf.org" <ops-dir@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-10
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Roman, 

Can the mechanism specified in the draft be used to validate the Virtual Network IDs of SD-WAN edge devices? 
For example, an SDWAN edge deployed in a remote site, say a shopping mall, might advertise the routes and client VPN IDs to the BGP Route-Reflector (RR). The RR needs to validate the Client's IDs are legitimate. Can the mechanism specified in the draft do the job? 

Thanks, Linda


On 10/20/22, 10:36 PM, "Linda Dunbar" <linda.dunbar@futurewei.com> wrote:

    Roman, 

    With you bringing back the explanation, all makes sense to me now. Wish your explanation is incorporated into the document. 
    Thanks, Linda

    On 10/20/22, 6:53 PM, "Roman Danyliw" <rdd@cert.org> wrote:

        Thanks for the re-review Linda.  

        ACME WG: here is the thread from the IETF LC where proposed changes were discussed: https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fmailarchive.ietf.org%2Farch%2Fmsg%2Flast-call%2FnujBgHd6ZKHY6fG58ZWBKzFGVWs%2F&amp;data=05%7C01%7Clinda.dunbar%40futurewei.com%7C3d47157879904a302e3008dab2f65009%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C638019068235813966%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&amp;sdata=t83ICajIF%2FEIKzibHtGs0T9FFSQpSFmBxKdxxgGHkPY%3D&amp;reserved=0

        > -----Original Message-----
        > From: Linda Dunbar via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
        > Sent: Thursday, October 20, 2022 6:55 PM
        > To: ops-dir@ietf.org
        > Cc: acme@ietf.org; draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid.all@ietf.org; last-call@ietf.org
        > Subject: Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-10
        > 
        > Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
        > Review result: Has Issues
        > 
        > I have reviewed this document as part of the Ops area directorate's ongoing
        > effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
        > comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Ops area directors.
        > Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any
        > other last call comments.
        > 
        > This document specifies an extension to ACME protocol which allows an ACME
        > server to validate the Delay-Tolerant Networking Node ID for an ACME client.
        > 
        > I had the following comments for the -07 version. I don't think the latest
        > version (-10) resolved my comments.
        > 
        > Issues:
        > 
        > The document didn't describe how the Node ID described in this document is
        > related to the Delay Tolerant Network. I see the mechanism can be equally
        > used in any network. What are the specifics related to the "Delay Tolerant
        > Network"?
        > It would be helpful if the document adds a paragraph explaining the specific
        > characteristics of the Delay-Tolerant Network that require the additional
        > parameters/types used for validating the Node-ID for an ACME client.
        > 
        > Thank you,
        > 
        > Linda Dunbar
        >