Re: [Last-Call] [CCAMP] Last Call: <draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16.txt> (A YANG Data Model for Layer 1 Types) to Proposed Standard
Italo Busi <Italo.Busi@huawei.com> Wed, 14 February 2024 14:17 UTC
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From: Italo Busi <Italo.Busi@huawei.com>
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] [CCAMP] Last Call: <draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16.txt> (A YANG Data Model for Layer 1 Types) to Proposed Standard
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Dear Tom, Thank you for the review, the authors have updated the document to address your comments and posted the updated document as draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-17. For clarity we have included the proposed resolution for each issue identified in the text below [Haomian & Italo]. Again, thanks for the support and review. Authors, Haomian and Italo. > -----Original Message----- > From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> > Sent: mercoledì 15 novembre 2023 10:50 > To: last-call@ietf.org > Cc: rdd@cert.org; ccamp-chairs@ietf.org; ccamp@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ccamp- > layer1-types@ietf.org; daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com > Subject: Re: [CCAMP] Last Call: <draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16.txt> (A > YANG Data Model for Layer 1 Types) to Proposed Standard > > Here are some more comments on this I-D. My earlier comments I have > retained at the end. Again, not a proper review. > > YANG module > > description > /Layer 1 types/ Layer 1 YANG types/ > or perhaps > A YANG Data Model for Layer 1 Types > [Haomian & Italo] Fixed as " Layer 1 YANG types " > bandwidth scientific notation > is the canonical form lower case? > [Haomian & Italo] Yes > I like to view the Normative References but think that here I cannot because > they are subscription only. This issue came up before but I cannot > remember what the conclusion was and things may have moved on since > then. > > ANSI I have never been able to access - subscription only I think. > > ITU-T I have had problems with in the past but I now seem to have access > (but they could do with lessons from the datatracker about searching = I > really do not want 11587 hits for G.709!) > > IEEE I used to be able to access but now struggle - the website has moved > and been 'improved'. The URL in the HTML version of the I-D work but tell > me that I do not have access. 802,3 I have previously downloaded and > printed but seemingly no more. Online viewing such a large document I find > time consuming. > > Tom Petch > > > From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> > Sent: 10 November 2023 11:15 > > Some time ago ago I had this at my fingertips but no more:-( > > I may find time for a proper review but did note, so far, > > ISO/IEC C99 is in the I-D but not the I-D References > [Haomian & Italo] Added reference with URL (requires subscription) > IEEE Std 754-2008: is in the I-D but the references have -2019; this topic is > fraught - it may be that the older one is wanted here > [Haomian & Italo] Reference updated to IEEE 754-2019 > ANSI T1.105-1995: is in the I-D but the references have 2001 > [Haomian & Italo] Reference updated to ANSI T1.105-2001 > p.5 'section Section' > [Haomian & Italo] Fixed > p.7 several should that might be SHOULD > [Haomian & Italo] Fixed > Tom Petch > > ________________________________________ > From: CCAMP <ccamp-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of The IESG <iesg- > secretary@ietf.org> > Sent: 31 October 2023 16:01 > To: IETF-Announce > Cc: rdd@cert.org; ccamp-chairs@ietf.org; ccamp@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ccamp- > layer1-types@ietf.org; daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com > Subject: [CCAMP] Last Call: <draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16.txt> (A YANG > Data Model for Layer 1 Types) to Proposed Standard > > > The IESG has received a request from the Common Control and > Measurement Plane WG (ccamp) to consider the following document: - 'A > YANG Data Model for Layer > 1 Types' > <draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-16.txt> as Proposed Standard > > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final > comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the last- > call@ietf.org mailing lists by 2023-11-21. Exceptionally, comments may be > sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of > the Subject line to allow automated sorting. > > Abstract > > > This document defines a collection of common data types and groupings > in the YANG data modeling language for use with layer 1 networks. > These derived common types and groupings are intended to be imported > by modules that specify OTN networks, such as topology, tunnel, > client signal adaptation and service. > > > > > > The file can be obtained via > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types/ > > > > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. > > > The document contains these normative downward references. > See RFC 3967 for additional information: > draft-ietf-teas-rfc8776-update: Common YANG Data Types for Traffic > Engineering (None - Internet Engineering Task Force (IETF)) > > > > > _______________________________________________ > CCAMP mailing list > CCAMP@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ccamp >