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Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection-10

Ron Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Mon, 24 October 2022 17:10 UTC

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From: Ron Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 24 Oct 2022 20:10:33 +0300
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To: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection-10
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Thanks
Roni

On Fri, 7 Oct 2022 at 8:51 Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
wrote:

> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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> Document: draft-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2022-10-06
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-10
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary:
> The documents is ready for publication as an experimental RFC with nits
>
> Major issues:
>
> Minor issues:
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 1. in sections 4.2 and 4.4 I think that the length field is always 5. so
> why
> not specify this value. 2.In section 7 second paragraph I am not sure what
> is
> the meaning of "very very corner case". is it a unique case or a rare case
> or
> just a corner case? also should there be a comma after "only" so it should
> be
> "only, in which ..." otherwise I am not sure what the sentence means.
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