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Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-05

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Mon, 24 April 2023 12:53 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-05
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Meral, thank you for your review! I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Lars

> On 25. Oct 2022, at 09:01, Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
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> Document: draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-05
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2022-10-24
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-27
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:This draft is almost ready to be published as Standard RFC, no other
> comments than those on the list.
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
> [Page 7] Section 5, "In order to to"--->"In order to"
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