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Re: [Last-Call] [homenet] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options-21

Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com> Sat, 08 October 2022 02:02 UTC

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From: Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 07 Oct 2022 22:01:43 -0400
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To: Bron Gondwana <brong@fastmailteam.com>
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] [homenet] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-homenet-naming-architecture-dhc-options-21
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Thanks Bron for the review, that is well appreciated. I like your
suggestion and we will check with the RFC Editor and IANA what is the best
way to handle this and avoid repeating the values assigned by IANA.

Yours,
Daniel

On Wed, Oct 5, 2022 at 2:39 AM Bron Gondwana via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Reviewer: Bron Gondwana
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> Thanks to the authors for this, and apologies for a slightly delayed
> review.
>
> I read this document and skim-read the linked
> draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation which describes why these
> fields
> might want to be provided by DHCPv6.
>
> I found this document clear and easy to read - there were no nits that
> stood
> out to me other than the double-definition of the "Supported Transport"
> field.
> While there is a chicken-and-egg problem, the RFC editor and IANA could be
> instructed to link things up such that section 4 immediately named the
> registry
> to look up the values in rather than hard-coding an initial table into this
> document, and having future readers reach this section without finding the
> pointer to IANA in the natural place.
>
> Likewise once the values are assigned by IANA for the DHCP option codes,
> putting them directly into this document in the spots where a reader would
> naturally be looking would help implementations.
>
> Overall - this document has a very long history - well done for sticking
> with
> it.  I hope one day to buy a product which uses the end result of this
> work and
> transparently configures MY home network!
>
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Daniel Migault
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