[Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-lsp-ping-08
Joel Halpern via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sat, 08 October 2022 01:13 UTC
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Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-lsp-ping-08 Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review Date: 2022-10-07 IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-18 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC. Major issues: N/A Minor issues: N/A Nits/editorial comments: Should the RDs in section 6.1 and 6.2 use example IP addresses instead of 1.1.1.1 and 2.2.2.2? (ID Nits called my attention to this, and I could not decide if it was important. So it is a nit here.)
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