Re: [Last-Call] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use-cases-12

H Y <yuuhei.hayashi@gmail.com> Sat, 08 October 2022 01:01 UTC

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Date: Sat, 08 Oct 2022 10:01:08 +0900
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Hi Phillip,

Thank you for your careful review!

Thanks,
Yuhei

2022年10月5日(水) 8:56 Phillip Hallam-Baker via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>:
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> Reviewer: Phillip Hallam-Baker
> Review result: Ready
>
> The document describes additional telemetry data types for DDoS signaling. As
> such, the document appropriately references the security considerations in the
> base specification, RFC9244.
>
> Given the subject domain is adversarial, constant development of new attack
> presentations is to be expected and thus the need for constant extension of the
> telemetry description.
>
> Where machine-learning techniques are used, it may be useful to provide a label
> to distinguish the techniques in use so that other elements in the system can
> react appropriately when the technique or parameters are changed.
>
>


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