[Last-Call] Re: Iotdir last call review of draft-ietf-anima-jws-voucher-12
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To: Eliot Lear <lear@cisco.com>, "iot-directorate@ietf.org" <iot-directorate@ietf.org>
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Thanks for your feedback, Eliot! With respect to the examples nits, the focus of draft-ietf-anima-jws-voucher is on voucher objects. More concrete use cases should be described in other specifications, e.g., draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm Best regards Thomas Von: Eliot Lear via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Datum: Montag, 16. September 2024 um 10:50 An: iot-directorate@ietf.org <iot-directorate@ietf.org> Cc: anima@ietf.org <anima@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-anima-jws-voucher.all@ietf.org <draft-ietf-anima-jws-voucher.all@ietf.org>, last-call@ietf.org <last-call@ietf.org> Betreff: Iotdir last call review of draft-ietf-anima-jws-voucher-12 Reviewer: Eliot Lear Review result: Ready with Nits This draft describes a JWS-protected RFC-8366 voucher. It is well written and clear. Major issues: None. Minor issues: None. Nits: I would prefer a more complete test vector in the examples. That is, could you provide the inputs that produced them?
- [Last-Call] Iotdir last call review of draft-ietf… Eliot Lear via Datatracker
- [Last-Call] Re: Iotdir last call review of draft-… Werner, Thomas
- [Last-Call] Re: [Anima] Re: Iotdir last call revi… Eliot Lear