[Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc5933-bis-10
Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 13 October 2022 11:41 UTC
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Subject: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc5933-bis-10
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Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc5933-bis-?? Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2022-10-13 IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-19 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: the document is almost ready for publication as some type of an RFC Major issues: The document is meant to be an informational RFC obsoleting RFC5933 a standard track RFC. why is this change. Minor issues: the directive in the IANA consideration "The entry for Value 3, GOST R 34.11-94 should be updated to have its Status changed to '-'" is not clear. there is no status field in the table as I see in RFC8624 section 3.3 Nits/editorial comments:
- [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf… Roni Even via Datatracker
- Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-… Макаренко Борис
- Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-… Ron Even
- Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-… Boris Makarenko
- Re: [Last-Call] [Ext] [DNSOP] Genart last call re… Paul Hoffman
- Re: [Last-Call] [Ext] [DNSOP] Genart last call re… Warren Kumari
- Re: [Last-Call] [Ext] [DNSOP] Genart last call re… Tim Wicinski
- Re: [Last-Call] [Ext] [DNSOP] Genart last call re… Ron Even
- Re: [Last-Call] [Ext] [DNSOP] Genart last call re… Warren Kumari
- Re: [Last-Call] [Ext] [DNSOP] Genart last call re… Warren Kumari
- Re: [Last-Call] [Ext] [DNSOP] Genart last call re… Warren Kumari
- Re: [Last-Call] [Ext] [DNSOP] Genart last call re… Boris Makarenko