[Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc5933-bis-10

Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 13 October 2022 11:41 UTC

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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Almost Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc5933-bis-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2022-10-13
IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-19
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
the document is almost ready for publication as some type of an RFC

Major issues:
The document is meant to be an informational RFC obsoleting RFC5933 a standard
track RFC. why is this change.

Minor issues:

the directive in the IANA consideration   "The entry for Value 3, GOST R
34.11-94 should be updated to have its Status changed to '-'" is not clear.
there is no status field in the table as I see in RFC8624 section 3.3

Nits/editorial comments: