[Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-flex-algo-23

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Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-lsr-flex-algo-23
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 2022-09-19
IETF LC End Date: 2022-09-26
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

Ready.

This document specifies a solution that allows IGPs themselves to compute
constraint-based paths over the network. It specifies a set of extensions to
IS-IS, OSPFv2, and OSPFv3 that enable a router to advertise TLVs to identify
the data and path information to perform this tasks. It's a complex but well
written and organized document.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: