[lemonade] Comments on draft-ietf-lemonade-compress-04.txt

This version looks terrific.

Two minor things:

(1) In Section 4 (Compression Efficiency), I'd suggest changing:

     clients which send many APPEND commands may want to
     surround large literals with flushes in the same way as is
     recommended for server below.

in two ways:

(1a) change "server" to "servers"
(1b) change "below" to "in Section 4, Compression Efficiency".

(2) In Section 7 (IANA Considerations), "another compression" should 
be "another compression mechanism".
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