[lemonade] Re: Comments on draft-ietf-lemonade-compress-04.txt

Randall Gellens writes:
> This version looks terrific.
>
> Two minor things:
>
> (1) In Section 4 (Compression Efficiency), I'd suggest changing:
>
>     clients which send many APPEND commands may want to
>     surround large literals with flushes in the same way as is
>     recommended for server below.
>
> in two ways:
>
> (1a) change "server" to "servers"

Of course.

> (1b) change "below" to "in Section 4, Compression Efficiency".

Really? It's the same section. Perhaps "in this section" or something?

> (2) In Section 7 (IANA Considerations), "another compression" should 
> be "another compression mechanism".

Of course.

Arnt

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