Re: [Lime] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-04.txt

Dear Authors, et. al,
please kindly consider my notes to the latest version of the draft:

   - I propose to use the definition proposed in my comments
   to draft-ietf-lime-yang-oam-model to differentiate between proactive and
   on-demand OAM. If we agree that on-demand OAM does not require persistent
   configuration, then for example, ICMP ping should use only RPC, not
   configuration;
   - still not clear role of "level" that can have value from the {-1, 0,
   1} set.Is it to identify horizontal OAM domains? Why only three, could it
   be next-to-next domain?
   - what is "network portion"? Is it "administrative domain"? Please
   clarify in the text.
   - what are use cases for the following Test Point locations:
      - tunnel-location;
      - ip-prefix-location
      - route-dist-location
      - group-ip-address-location
      - as-number-location
      - lsp-id-location
      - system-id-location
      - opaque-tlv-type
   - Why only IEEE-1588v2 format supported? Timestamps applied in control
   plane may be natively in NTP format.
   - I believe there's error in

          leaf timestamp-sec {
            type uint64;
            description
                        "Absolute timestamp in
                        seconds as per IEEE1588v2.";
          }
          leaf timestamp-nanosec {
            type uint32;
            description
                        "Fractional part in
                        nanoseconds as per IEEE1588v2.";
          }

since the truncated IEEE-1588v2 timestamp format is 64 bits long and consists
of a 32-bit seconds field followed by a 32-bit nanoseconds field, and is
the same as the IEEE 1588v1 timestamp format.
Network Time Protocol version 4 64-bit timestamp format RFC 5905. This
format consists of a 32-bit seconds field followed by a 32-bit fractional
seconds field.

   - Connectivity verification in connectionless network and connectionless
   OAM has no meaning.

Regards,
Greg

On Fri, Feb 24, 2017 at 1:45 AM, wangzitao <wangzitao@huawei.com> wrote:

> Dear WG,
>
> According to the WGLC discussions, we update the Connectionless OAM YANG
> document.
> Thanks AdrIan Farrel, Greg Mirsky and others’ review and comments.
> In this version, we fix some nits, add some descriptions, and address
> issues raised in email discussion.
> More details please see the draft.
>
> Best Regards!
> -Michael
>
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> 发送时间: 2017年2月24日 14:43
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> 主题: [Lime] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-04.txt
>
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Layer Independent OAM Management in the
> Multi-Layer Environment of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Generic YANG Data Model for Connectionless
> Operations, Administration, and Maintenance(OAM) protocols
>         Authors         : Deepak Kumar
>                           Michael Wang
>                           Qin Wu
>                           Reshad Rahman
>                           Srihari Raghavan
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-04.txt
>         Pages           : 58
>         Date            : 2017-02-23
>
> Abstract:
>    This document presents a base YANG Data model for connectionless
>    Operations Administration, and Maintenance(OAM) protocols.  It
>    provides a technology-independent abstraction of key OAM constructs
>    for connectionless protocols.  The base model presented here can be
>    extended to include technology specific details.  This is leading to
>    uniformity between OAM protocols and support both nested OAM
>    workflows (i.e., performing OAM functions at different or same levels
>    through a unified interface).
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam/
>
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> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-04
>
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> connectionless-oam-04
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>
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