[lisp] John Scudder's No Objection on charter-ietf-lisp-04-06: (with COMMENT)

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charter-ietf-lisp-04-06: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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“LISP deployments could benefit from more advanced internet-working”

Should this be “interworking”? If not, why not?

Editorial:

s/identified by the working as main LISP applications/identified by the working
group as main LISP applications/ (add “group”)

s/The management of LISP protocol and deployments include data models, OAM/The
management of LISP protocol and deployments including data models, OAM/
(“include” should be “including”)

s/LISP tunnel endpoints are separated from by a NAT/LISP tunnel endpoints are
separated from one another by a NAT/ (add “one another”)

s/leveraging on/leveraging/ (remove “on”)