Re: [lisp] draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-14

Luigi Iannone <ggx@gigix.net> Wed, 22 August 2018 08:00 UTC

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From: Luigi Iannone <ggx@gigix.net>
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Date: Wed, 22 Aug 2018 10:00:07 +0200
Cc: "Scott O. Bradner" <sob@sobco.com>, draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis.all@ietf.org, "lisp@ietf.org list" <lisp@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [lisp] draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-14
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Hi Dino,

the new section in 6833bis looks good to me. Just two nits:
In the first line of the first bullet the word “document” is misspelled: docuemnt -> document
In the second sentence of the same bullet: "Any receivers" -> "Any receiver"

Ciao

L.


> On 20 Aug 2018, at 21:29, Dino Farinacci <farinacci@gmail.com> wrote:
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> <rfcdiff-rfc6833bis.html>