[lisp] draft-ietf-lisp-yang

[tom petch <[e-mail]>]

Some mostly non-technical thoughts on this I-D which caught my eye

Abstract I find a bit sparse - what does the YANG module enable a user to do?
Configure, manage, monitor, ...

I like the choice of module names and prefixes - so often these are a melange.

In the YANG module

WG Web is ood
as are the references to lisp-lcaf-10 but I think that those should be RFCYYYY or some such and not a URI

references to BSD license is ood

There is a mixture of XXX and XXXX which I think refer to the same I-D - consistency is good

I note you switched from Enumeration to Identity.  As I think you know, the former have stronger change control, the latter none so a vendor can add new roles.  I am not sure if this is a good idea.

You have the same string pattern five times; worth a derived type, unless you think that they are going to diverge

/locartors/locators/

references in the YANG module must appear in the I-D references; I do not see
RFC2404
RFC4868
lisp-lcaf which I think should be RFCyyyy or some such
IANA address family numbers

The IP addresses use the form that includes a zone of indeterminate length; is this intended?

reference clause for the revision should be to this document

IANA Considerations is double line spaced

HTH
Tom Petch