Re: [lp-wan] [IoT-DIR] Iotdir early review of draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-08

[Samita Chakrabarti <[e-mail]>]

Hi Suresh, Stephen and all:
My apologies for being late on the reviews from IoT directorate. I was not
aware about its progress already.

I would suggest changing some of the typos and inconsistencies that Stephen
probably has already taken care of.

Also I will provide him a few lines of text on the 6lowpan section which is
minimal change.

The editorial changes would have been easier for reading the document but I
understand the current situation. I am okay with Stephen's response at this
point and Suresh, I am fine with your decision.
Thanks,
-Samita


On Feb 6, 2018 12:24 PM, "Suresh Krishnan" <[e-mail]> wrote:

Hi Stephen/Samita,

(Removed the IETF Discussion list)

On Feb 6, 2018, at 10:10 AM, Stephen Farrell <[e-mail]>
wrote:


Hi Samita,

Thanks for the review. As this document has at this stage been
through IESG evaluation, I think it's best to avoid changes if
possible, but I'll be guided by the responsible AD, (i.e. if
Suresh tells me he thinks some change is needed, I'll do it.)
For such cases below I just say I think it's a bit late for
the change suggested.


Yep. I think this review was due 2017/12/01 and the draft has already gone
through IESG evaluation. At this point I would not like to make changes
unless they are errors or obvious typos. Depending on the type and amount
of changes made, I can recycle the document through the IESG if needed.
Stephen’s accepted changes look fine to me and if they are fine with you
Samita you can submit a new revision.

Alex/Pascal,
  Any thoughts on this?

Regards
Suresh