Re: [manet] [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-pause-extension-05

Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net> Thu, 04 April 2019 02:08 UTC

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From: Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net>
To: Andy Smith <andsmit@cisco.com>, <rtg-dir@ietf.org>, Andy Smith via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
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Thanks for the review and will do.

Lou


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On March 29, 2019 11:48:43 AM Andy Smith via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> 
wrote:

> Reviewer: Andy Smith
> Review result: Ready
>
> Hello,
>
> I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The
> Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as
> they pass through IETF last call and IESG review. The purpose of the review is
> to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the
> Routing Directorate, please see
> ?http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir
>
> Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would
> be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call
> comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by
> updating the draft.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-pause-extension
> Reviewer: Andy Smith
> Review Date: 29 March 2019
>
> Summary:
> This document is well written and easy to understand.  I see no reason it
> cannot be published.
>
> Comments:
> This document is well written and easy to understand.  I see no reason it
> cannot be published.
>
> Major Issues:
> None
>
> Minor Issues:
> None
>
> Nits:
> It might be helpful to expand the acronym "TBA" in the requested Data Item Type
> field.
>
>