Re: [manet] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5497 (1723)
"Dearlove, Christopher (UK)" <chris.dearlove@baesystems.com> Mon, 16 March 2009 10:39 UTC
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From: "Dearlove, Christopher (UK)" <chris.dearlove@baesystems.com>
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As discussed in my reply to erratum 1724, there is an error, but the correction here is incorrect. The correction should be Original Text ------------- a) Section 7.1, last paragraph An INTERVAL_TIME TLV is an example of a Time TLV specified as in | Section 5. b) Section 7.2, last paragraph A VALIDITY_TIME TLV is an example of a Time TLV specified as in | Section 5. Corrected Text -------------- a) An INTERVAL_TIME TLV is an example of a Time TLV specified as in | Section 6. b) A VALIDITY_TIME TLV is an example of a Time TLV specified as in | Section 6. This is because part of the specification to be covered by the reference is in Section 6 before Section 6.1. Christopher Dearlove (co-author of RFC 5497) -- Christopher Dearlove Technology Leader, Communications Group Networks, Security and Information Systems Department BAE Systems Advanced Technology Centre West Hanningfield Road, Great Baddow, Chelmsford, CM2 8HN, UK Tel: +44 1245 242194 Fax: +44 1245 242124 BAE Systems (Operations) Limited Registered Office: Warwick House, PO Box 87, Farnborough Aerospace Centre, Farnborough, Hants, GU14 6YU, UK Registered in England & Wales No: 1996687 -----Original Message----- From: RFC Errata System [mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org] Sent: 16 March 2009 10:11 To: T.Clausen@computer.org; Dearlove, Christopher (UK); rcallon@juniper.net; dward@cisco.com; adrian@olddog.co.uk; macker@itd.nrl.navy.mil; ian.chakeres@gmail.com Cc: ah@TR-Sys.de; manet@ietf.org; rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org Subject: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5497 (1723) *** WARNING *** This mail has originated outside your organization, either from an external partner or the Global Internet. Keep this in mind if you answer this message. The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5497, "Representing Multi-Value Time in Mobile Ad Hoc Networks (MANETs)". -------------------------------------- You may review the report below and at: http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5497&eid=1723 -------------------------------------- Type: Editorial Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <ah@TR-Sys.de> Section: 7.1 and 7.2 Original Text ------------- a) Section 7.1, last paragraph An INTERVAL_TIME TLV is an example of a Time TLV specified as in | Section 5. b) Section 7.2, last paragraph A VALIDITY_TIME TLV is an example of a Time TLV specified as in | Section 5. Corrected Text -------------- a) An INTERVAL_TIME TLV is an example of a Time TLV specified as in | Section 6.1. b) A VALIDITY_TIME TLV is an example of a Time TLV specified as in | Section 6.1. Notes ----- Rationale: Section 5 only contains the low-level details; Section 6, and in particular Section 6.1, contains the precise specification of the Time TLV format used in Sections 7.1 and 7.2. Instructions: ------------- This errata is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG) can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. -------------------------------------- RFC5497 (draft-ietf-manet-timetlv-08) -------------------------------------- Title : Representing Multi-Value Time in Mobile Ad Hoc Networks (MANETs) Publication Date : March 2009 Author(s) : T. Clausen, C. Dearlove Category : PROPOSED STANDARD Source : Mobile Ad-hoc Networks Area : Routing Stream : IETF Verifying Party : IESG ******************************************************************** This email and any attachments are confidential to the intended recipient and may also be privileged. If you are not the intended recipient please delete it from your system and notify the sender. You should not copy it or use it for any purpose nor disclose or distribute its contents to any other person. ********************************************************************
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