[manet] WGLC comments on draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension

["Velt, R. (Ronald) in 't" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Authors, MANET WG participants,

Please find below my long overdue comments on draft-ietf-manet-dlep-credit-extension, one of three documents related to credit-based flow control that have been in WGLC for a long time. (With chair wig off).

Thanks,
Ronald

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Major Issues
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None

Minor Issues
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Section 1, Introduction, contains the somewhat puzzling sentence "Traffic sent by a router will use traffic flow classification information provided by the modem to identify which traffic is associated with each credit window." I would think it is the router, as opposed to the traffic, that uses the classification information. The traffic, which may originate from an upstream source, is what it is. But then the question is HOW the router should make use of the classification information. Should it re-mark certain traffic flows (i.e., alter their DSCPs) to ensure that they receive preferential treatment (i.e., are throttled last in case of congestion)? Can the router assume that the modem understands Per-Hop Behaviors? In my opinion, at the very least the sentence quoted above should be rephrased; in addition some further clarification on the mechanism foreseen could be helpful.

Nits
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Section 1

3rd para: "... to provided credit window based flow control ..." => "... to provide credit window based flow control ..."

3rd para: "... based on on DLEP destination and DiffServ [RFC2475] DSCPs (differentiated services codepoints)." => "... based on DLEP destinations and DiffServ [RFC2475] DSCPs (differentiated services codepoints)."

Section 2

1st para: "... the DiffServ Traffic Classification Sub Data Item," => "... the DiffServ Traffic Classification Sub-Data Item," (following the precedent set by RFC8651)

Appendix A

"The sub data item format was inspired ..." => "The Sub-Data Item format was inspired ..." (see above)
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