Re: [manet] I-D Action: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-pause-extension-03.txt

Abdussalam Baryun <abdussalambaryun@gmail.com> Mon, 05 March 2018 22:56 UTC

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Subject: Re: [manet] I-D Action: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-pause-extension-03.txt
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Hi Lou,

mini-thing, I don't agree with the draft as:

draft>   1 KB - Kilobytes (B/1024)

AB>
 1 KB = kilobyte=  B * 1024,
 1 MB = KB * 1024


kilobytes != B/1024  (we cannot replace 'kilobytes' with 'B/1024')
but 'B/1024' can be replaced by 'kilobytes'

so that is similar for MB and GB. What do you think?

AB

On Fri, Mar 2, 2018 at 4:14 PM, Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net> wrote:

> Hi,
>
> This is a trivial update fixing a couple of typos. Note that it is aligned
> with the credit draft in its use of sub data item format, but it doesn't
> use the traffic classification data item. I looked at as we discussed this
> possibility at IETF 100 but it didn't seem to really buy anything.
>
> All open issues are now addressed. Please take a look and send comments.
>
> Cheers,
>
> Lou
>
>
>
> On March 1, 2018 4:52:13 PM internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>
>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Mobile Ad-hoc Networks WG of the IETF.
>>
>>         Title           : DLEP Control Plane Based Pause Extension
>>         Authors         : Bow-Nan Cheng
>>                           David Wiggins
>>                           Lou Berger
>>         Filename        : draft-ietf-manet-dlep-pause-extension-03.txt
>>         Pages           : 11
>>         Date            : 2018-03-01
>>
>> Abstract:
>>    This document defines an extension to the DLEP protocol that enables
>>    a modem to use DLEP messages to pause and resume data traffic coming
>>    from its peer router.
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-manet-dlep-pause-extension/
>>
>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-manet-dlep-pause-extension-03
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-manet-dlep-
>> pause-extension-03
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-manet-dlep-paus
>> e-extension-03
>>
>>
>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
>> submission
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>>
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