[media-types] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-mediaman-haptics-05: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [media-types] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-mediaman-haptics-05: (with COMMENT)
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Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-mediaman-haptics-05: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mediaman-haptics/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- # GEN AD review of draft-ietf-mediaman-haptics-05 CC @larseggert Thanks to Mallory Knodel for the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review (https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/TqOyzAUOeTyOtRys9E58FeOnQuY). ## Comments ### Boilerplate This document uses the RFC2119 keywords "OPTIONAL", "SHOULD", "REQUIRED", "MUST NOT", "NOT RECOMMENDED", "SHALL NOT", "SHALL", "RECOMMENDED", "MUST", and "MAY", but does not contain the recommended RFC8174 boilerplate. ### Inclusive language Found terminology that should be reviewed for inclusivity; see https://www.rfc-editor.org/part2/#inclusive_language for background and more guidance: * Term `native`; alternatives might be `built-in`, `fundamental`, `ingrained`, `intrinsic`, `original` ## Nits All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you did with these suggestions. ### URLs These URLs in the document can probably be converted to HTTPS: * http://www.iana.org/form/media-types ### Grammar/style #### Section 2.5, paragraph 6 ``` ocial media application QQ and live streaming application NOW: Immersion-Ann ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ``` This expression is normally spelled as one or with a hyphen. #### Section 4.1, paragraph 1 ``` a parameter sub-value in the comma- separated list, it should ignore the su ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ``` This word seems to be formatted incorrectly. Consider fixing the spacing or removing the hyphen completely. ## Notes This review is in the ["IETF Comments" Markdown format][ICMF], You can use the [`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into individual GitHub issues. Review generated by the [`ietf-reviewtool`][IRT]. [ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md [ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments [IRT]: https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool
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