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Re: [media-types] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mediaman-haptics-05

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Wed, 20 September 2023 12:50 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
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Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 15:50:03 +0300
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Subject: Re: [media-types] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mediaman-haptics-05
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Mallory, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars


> On Sep 11, 2023, at 23:15, Mallory Knodel via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
> 
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> <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>.
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> Document: draft-ietf-mediaman-haptics-??
> Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
> Review Date: 2023-09-11
> IETF LC End Date: 2023-09-11
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: The document aims to register a new media type for 'haptics' by making
> the case for why it is needed and doesn't currently fit under existing media
> types, as well as provide the relevant information in order to register the new
> media type 'haptics' with IANA.
> 
> Major issues: Technically, none. Suggest some harmony with the in-progress
> [TOPLEVEL] reference (I-D to determine how registration be done for new media
> types) to ensure this draft follows that guidance, which is presumably being
> developed, in parallel, with community consensus.
> 
> Minor issues: This should not stand in the way of progressing the draft and
> would be subject to the judgement of the WG chairs, but perhaps much of the
> Section 2 background could be moved to an annex as it may be out of date in the
> future. This would also allow the IANA registration details, which are
> ultimately the most important matter of this text, to appear sooner in the
> draft. The background details offer important context, but for the purposes of
> registration may not be needed, ie according to [TOPLEVEL] guidance.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: The higher level focus of my review did not reveal any
> editorial nits.
> 
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