RE: [MIB-DOCTORS] MIB Doctors LastCallforhttp://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-schoenw-snmp-ether-01.txt

["David B Harrington" <[e-mail]>]

That would be fine.
The comments are purely editorial.
I would be happy even if the editors chose to simply ignore the
comments.  

dbh

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Romascanu, Dan (Dan) [mailto:[e-mail]] 
> Sent: Monday, July 31, 2006 1:23 PM
> To: David Harrington; [e-mail]; Tony Jeffree
> Cc: [e-mail]
> Subject: RE: [MIB-DOCTORS] MIB Doctors 
> LastCallforhttp://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-schoenw-s
> nmp-ether-01.txt
> 
> David,
> 
> As the review period on mib-doctors expired three days ago, and I
have
> already pushed the 'Submit to IETF Last Call' button, would you be
OK
> with considering these comments IETF LC comments? 
> 
> Thanks and Regards,
> 
> Dan
> 
> 
>  
>  
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: David Harrington [mailto:[e-mail]] 
> > Sent: Monday, July 31, 2006 8:18 PM
> > To: [e-mail]; 'Tony Jeffree'
> > Cc: Romascanu, Dan (Dan); [e-mail]
> > Subject: RE: [MIB-DOCTORS] MIB Doctors Last 
> > Callforhttp://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-schoenw-snmp-
> > ether-01.txt
> > 
> > Hi,
> > 
> > I thought I'd wait until all chance of comment was disallowed 
> > before commenting ;-) Here are a few editorial nits.
> > 
> > 1) in the introduction, it says this document "complements" 
> > the standard. I think it would be more accurate to say 
> > "supplements". To complement completes something; to 
> > supplement completes or adds to something. 
> > 
> > 2) This document claims to describe how to send SNMP messages 
> > over 802 networks, but is actually about sending messages 
> > over Ethernet. Should the claim be that the document 
> > describes how to send SNMP messages over 802.3 networks? Or 
> > does the encapsulation make this 802-generic?
> > 
> > 3) The introduction includes part of the boilerplate for the 
> > Internet-Standard Management Fraeowkr, but calls it the SNMP 
> > management framework, which is slightly incorrect.
> > 
> > 4) It is considered desirable to have sections that discuss 
> > the structure of the MIB module, and the relationship to 
> > other MIB modules. I don't know if it justified in this case, 
> > but thought I'd point out that they are not present, and when 
> > we don't do it, it is harder to justify having others do it.
> > 
> > 5) In the acknowledgements sections, it is a little ambiguous 
> > about whether Dan and Bert provided guidance on "this" 
> > document or on rfc1089. A new paragraph would make it clearer.
> > 
> > 6) The acknowldgements for the RFC editor task (at the end of the
> > document) should probably be updated to refer to IASA rather 
> > than ISOC.
> > 
> > dbh
> > 
> > 
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: Romascanu, Dan (Dan) [mailto:[e-mail]]
> > > Sent: Monday, July 31, 2006 10:27 AM
> > > To: Romascanu, Dan (Dan); [e-mail]
> > > Cc: Tony Jeffree
> > > Subject: RE: [MIB-DOCTORS] MIB Doctors Last
> > > Callforhttp://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-schoenw-snmp-
> > > ether-01.txt
> > > 
> > > The MIB Doctors review period expired without any substantial
> > comments
> > > and two messages of support with the current version of the 
> > > Internet-Draft. I will proceed with sending the document to IETF
> > Last
> > > Call. 
> > > 
> > > Regards,
> > > 
> > > Dan
> > > 
> > > 
> > >  
> > >  
> > > 
> > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > From: Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
> > > > Sent: Wednesday, July 19, 2006 6:45 AM
> > > > To: [e-mail]
> > > > Cc: Tony Jeffree
> > > > Subject: [MIB-DOCTORS] MIB Doctors Last Call
> > > > 
> > >
> > 
>
forhttp://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-schoenw-snmp-ether-01.txt
> > > > 
> > > > 
> > > > I would like to invite the MIB Doctors to read and review 
> > > >
> >
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-schoenw-snmp-ether-01.txt.
> > > > This document is authored by Juergen and by the chair of IEEE 
> > > > 802.1 and will obsolete RFC 1089 updating it to support 
> > > > transport of SNMPv3 over IEEE 802 networks. 
> > > > 
> > > > If you have any comments or questions, please send them to 
> > > > [e-mail] and also copy Tony Jeffree. This Last 
> > > > Call expires on July 28. 
> > > > 
> > > > Thanks and Regards,
> > > > 
> > > > Dan
> > > > 
> > > > 
> > > > 
> > > >  
> > > > 
> > > > 
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