RE: [MIB-DOCTORS] MIB Doctors Last Callforhttp://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-schoenw-snmp-ether-01.txt

["Romascanu, Dan \(Dan\)" <[e-mail]>]

David,

As the review period on mib-doctors expired three days ago, and I have
already pushed the 'Submit to IETF Last Call' button, would you be OK
with considering these comments IETF LC comments? 

Thanks and Regards,

Dan


 
 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: David Harrington [mailto:[e-mail]] 
> Sent: Monday, July 31, 2006 8:18 PM
> To: [e-mail]; 'Tony Jeffree'
> Cc: Romascanu, Dan (Dan); [e-mail]
> Subject: RE: [MIB-DOCTORS] MIB Doctors Last 
> Callforhttp://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-schoenw-snmp-
> ether-01.txt
> 
> Hi,
> 
> I thought I'd wait until all chance of comment was disallowed 
> before commenting ;-) Here are a few editorial nits.
> 
> 1) in the introduction, it says this document "complements" 
> the standard. I think it would be more accurate to say 
> "supplements". To complement completes something; to 
> supplement completes or adds to something. 
> 
> 2) This document claims to describe how to send SNMP messages 
> over 802 networks, but is actually about sending messages 
> over Ethernet. Should the claim be that the document 
> describes how to send SNMP messages over 802.3 networks? Or 
> does the encapsulation make this 802-generic?
> 
> 3) The introduction includes part of the boilerplate for the 
> Internet-Standard Management Fraeowkr, but calls it the SNMP 
> management framework, which is slightly incorrect.
> 
> 4) It is considered desirable to have sections that discuss 
> the structure of the MIB module, and the relationship to 
> other MIB modules. I don't know if it justified in this case, 
> but thought I'd point out that they are not present, and when 
> we don't do it, it is harder to justify having others do it.
> 
> 5) In the acknowledgements sections, it is a little ambiguous 
> about whether Dan and Bert provided guidance on "this" 
> document or on rfc1089. A new paragraph would make it clearer.
> 
> 6) The acknowldgements for the RFC editor task (at the end of the
> document) should probably be updated to refer to IASA rather 
> than ISOC.
> 
> dbh
> 
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Romascanu, Dan (Dan) [mailto:[e-mail]]
> > Sent: Monday, July 31, 2006 10:27 AM
> > To: Romascanu, Dan (Dan); [e-mail]
> > Cc: Tony Jeffree
> > Subject: RE: [MIB-DOCTORS] MIB Doctors Last
> > Callforhttp://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-schoenw-snmp-
> > ether-01.txt
> > 
> > The MIB Doctors review period expired without any substantial
> comments
> > and two messages of support with the current version of the 
> > Internet-Draft. I will proceed with sending the document to IETF
> Last
> > Call. 
> > 
> > Regards,
> > 
> > Dan
> > 
> > 
> >  
> >  
> > 
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
> > > Sent: Wednesday, July 19, 2006 6:45 AM
> > > To: [e-mail]
> > > Cc: Tony Jeffree
> > > Subject: [MIB-DOCTORS] MIB Doctors Last Call
> > > 
> >
> forhttp://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-schoenw-snmp-ether-01.txt
> > > 
> > > 
> > > I would like to invite the MIB Doctors to read and review 
> > >
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-schoenw-snmp-ether-01.txt.
> > > This document is authored by Juergen and by the chair of IEEE 
> > > 802.1 and will obsolete RFC 1089 updating it to support 
> > > transport of SNMPv3 over IEEE 802 networks. 
> > > 
> > > If you have any comments or questions, please send them to 
> > > [e-mail] and also copy Tony Jeffree. This Last 
> > > Call expires on July 28. 
> > > 
> > > Thanks and Regards,
> > > 
> > > Dan
> > > 
> > > 
> > > 
> > >  
> > > 
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