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[mile] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7970 (5423)

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Subject: [mile] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7970 (5423)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7970,
"The Incident Object Description Exchange Format Version 2".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5423

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Takeshi Takahashi <takeshi_takahashi@nict.go.jp>

Section: 8

Original Text
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<xs:element name="ThreatActor">
      <xs:complexType>
        <xs:sequence>
          <xs:element ref="iodef:ThreatActorID"
                      minOccurs="0" maxOccurs="unbounded"/>
          <xs:element ref="iodef:URL" maxOccurs="unbounded"/>
          <xs:element ref="iodef:Description"
                      minOccurs="0" maxOccurs="unbounded"/>
          <xs:element ref="iodef:AdditionalData"
                      minOccurs="0" maxOccurs="unbounded"/>
        </xs:sequence>
        <xs:attribute name="restriction"
                      type="iodef:restriction-type" use="optional"/>
        <xs:attribute name="ext-restriction"
                      type="xs:string" use="optional"/>
      </xs:complexType>
    </xs:element>

Corrected Text
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<xs:element name="ThreatActor">
      <xs:complexType>
        <xs:sequence>
          <xs:element ref="iodef:ThreatActorID"
                      minOccurs="0" maxOccurs="unbounded"/>
          <xs:element ref="iodef:URL"
                      minOccurs="0" maxOccurs="unbounded"/>
          <xs:element ref="iodef:Description"
                      minOccurs="0" maxOccurs="unbounded"/>
          <xs:element ref="iodef:AdditionalData"
                      minOccurs="0" maxOccurs="unbounded"/>
        </xs:sequence>
        <xs:attribute name="restriction"
                      type="iodef:restriction-type" use="optional"/>
        <xs:attribute name="ext-restriction"
                      type="xs:string" use="optional"/>
      </xs:complexType>
    </xs:element>

Notes
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The number of URL occurance could be zero, according to the main body text.
The minOccurs of the URL in the TreatActorclass was defined.
(The default value of minOccurs is one, not zero.)

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RFC7970 (draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bis-26)
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Title               : The Incident Object Description Exchange Format Version 2
Publication Date    : November 2016
Author(s)           : R. Danyliw
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Managed Incident Lightweight Exchange
Area                : Security
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG

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