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Re: [mile] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mile-iodef-guidance-10

Kathleen Moriarty <kathleen.moriarty.ietf@gmail.com> Sat, 26 August 2017 01:13 UTC

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From: Kathleen Moriarty <kathleen.moriarty.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 25 Aug 2017 21:13:03 -0400
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To: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>, MILE IETF <mile@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [mile] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mile-iodef-guidance-10
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Thank you for the review and nits!

Kathleen

On Tue, Aug 22, 2017 at 7:08 PM, Meral Shirazipour
<meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for
> the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call
> comments.
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> For more information, please see the FAQ at
> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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> Document: draft-ietf-mile-iodef-guidance-10
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> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
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> Review Date: 2017-08-22
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> IETF LC End Date: 2017-08-25
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> IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-31
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> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC but I have
> comments.
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> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> -[Page 3], "should chose"---->"should choose"
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> -[Page 4], "language an the"---->"language and the"
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> -[Page 5], "that an successful"---->"that a successful"
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> -[Page 6], "can cary greatly"---->"can caryy greatly"
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> -[Page 8], "excercise"---->"exercise"
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> -[Page 8],"compteting"---->"competing"
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> Best Regards,
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> Meral
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> ---
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> Meral Shirazipour
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> Ericsson
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> Research
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Best regards,
Kathleen

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