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Re: [mile] New Version Notification - draft-ietf-mile-implementreport-09.txt

Kathleen Moriarty <kathleen.moriarty.ietf@gmail.com> Tue, 07 June 2016 20:48 UTC

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From: Kathleen Moriarty <kathleen.moriarty.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 07 Jun 2016 16:48:27 -0400
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Subject: Re: [mile] New Version Notification - draft-ietf-mile-implementreport-09.txt
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Hello Daisuke,

Thanks for the updated version!  I found a few nits, you can put them
in your next update.  I'll start last call in the meantime.

Section 5.2 line 3:

Change from:
(i.e., nicter) and several cooperate organizations.  Each
To:
(i.e., nicter) and several cooperating organizations.  Each

and later in the same section:

From:
activities from the IP address of a cooperate organization, then the
To:
activities from the IP address of a cooperating organization, then the

Section 6.1, second paragraph, change From:
One of the functionality implemented in CIMS was the ability to
 To:
One function implemented in CIMS was the ability to


Thank you,
Kathleen

On Tue, Jun 7, 2016 at 11:53 AM, Daisuke MIYAMOTO
<daisu-mi@nc.u-tokyo.ac.jp> wrote:
> Hello!
>
>  This -9 version clarified the SNML.
>
>> What is SNML?  Maybe you answered that with a reference, I'm not sure
> though.
>
>  I added the
>   Please see the section 6.2. The amended version used the formal name
> for SNLM and described a reference [SNML].
>
> Kind regards,
> Daisuke
>
> On 2016/06/08 0:47, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>>
>> A new version (-09) has been submitted for draft-ietf-mile-implementreport:
>> https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-mile-implementreport-09.txt
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker page for this Internet-Draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mile-implementreport/
>>
>> Diff from previous version:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mile-implementreport-09
>>
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>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
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Best regards,
Kathleen

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