Re: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-sci-08.txt

"Takeshi Takahashi" <takeshi_takahashi@nict.go.jp> Mon, 15 July 2013 01:49 UTC

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From: Takeshi Takahashi <takeshi_takahashi@nict.go.jp>
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Hello Eric,

Thank you for your kind comment,
It seems to be that the "/" was missing from the web address.
Thank you very much for letting me know that.
I also see your point. That would be better.

Let me change the text as follows after the call.

Current text:
Reference URI: http://standards.ieee.org/develop
               indconn/icsg/mmdef.html

Correct one:
Reference URI: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mile-sci/
               http://standards.ieee.org/develop/
               indconn/icsg/mmdef.html,

Kind regards,
Take



> -----Original Message-----
> From: Eric Burger [mailto:eburger@standardstrack.com]
> Sent: Monday, July 15, 2013 7:02 AM
> To: Takeshi Takahashi
> Cc: mile@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-sci-08.txt
> 
> The URL in the IANA section is broken. It goes nowhere. Did you mean
> http://grouper.ieee.org/groups/malware/malwg/Schema1.2/ ? If so, that is
> not an XSD, either.
> 
> If we have their approval, it would be easier to make the appendix the
> normative reference for MMDEF.
> 
> On Jul 5, 2013, at 4:01 AM, Takeshi Takahashi
> <takeshi_takahashi@nict.go.jp> wrote:
> 
> > Hello all,
> >
> > We've uploaded new version.
> > Just after we submitted the previous version (version-07) of the
> > draft, we've received email from the authors of MMDEF, and they kindly
> > allowed us to copy and paste MMDEF's schema inside the draft (though
> > they also preferred to paste only the web link instead of the schema
> > itself if possible).
> > So, this version includes the MMDEF 1.2's schema.
> >
> > Thank you.
> > Take
> >
> >
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: mile-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:mile-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf
> >> Of internet-drafts@ietf.org
> >> Sent: Friday, July 5, 2013 4:58 PM
> >> To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
> >> Cc: mile@ietf.org
> >> Subject: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-sci-08.txt
> >>
> >>
> >> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> >> directories.
> >> This draft is a work item of the Managed Incident Lightweight
> >> Exchange Working Group of the IETF.
> >>
> >> 	Title           : IODEF-extension for structured cybersecurity
> >> information
> >> 	Author(s)       : Takeshi Takahashi
> >>                          Kent Landfield
> >>                          Thomas Millar
> >>                          Youki Kadobayashi
> >> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-mile-sci-08.txt
> >> 	Pages           : 45
> >> 	Date            : 2013-07-05
> >>
> >> Abstract:
> >>   This document extends the Incident Object Description Exchange Format
> >>   (IODEF) defined in RFC 5070 [RFC5070] to exchange enriched
> >>   cybersecurity information among cybersecurity entities and
> facilitate
> >>   their operations.  It provides the capability of embedding structured
> >>   information, such as identifier- and XML-based information.
> >>
> >>
> >> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mile-sci
> >>
> >> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> >> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-mile-sci-08
> >>
> >> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> >> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mile-sci-08
> >>
> >>
> >> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> >> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
> >>
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