Re: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-sci-08.txt

"Takeshi Takahashi" <takeshi_takahashi@nict.go.jp> Mon, 15 July 2013 02:42 UTC

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From: Takeshi Takahashi <takeshi_takahashi@nict.go.jp>
To: 'Eric Burger' <eburger@standardstrack.com>
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Comma was in a wrong place, sorry. Let me send it again.

Correct one:
Reference URI: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mile-sci/,
               http://standards.ieee.org/develop/
               indconn/icsg/mmdef.html

Kind regards,
Take

> -----Original Message-----
> From: mile-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:mile-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
> Takeshi Takahashi
> Sent: Monday, July 15, 2013 10:50 AM
> To: 'Eric Burger'
> Cc: mile@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-sci-08.txt
> 
> Hello Eric,
> 
> Thank you for your kind comment,
> It seems to be that the "/" was missing from the web address.
> Thank you very much for letting me know that.
> I also see your point. That would be better.
> 
> Let me change the text as follows after the call.
> 
> Current text:
> Reference URI: http://standards.ieee.org/develop
>                indconn/icsg/mmdef.html
> 
> Correct one:
> Reference URI: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mile-sci/
>                http://standards.ieee.org/develop/
>                indconn/icsg/mmdef.html,
> 
> Kind regards,
> Take
> 
> 
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Eric Burger [mailto:eburger@standardstrack.com]
> > Sent: Monday, July 15, 2013 7:02 AM
> > To: Takeshi Takahashi
> > Cc: mile@ietf.org
> > Subject: Re: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-sci-08.txt
> >
> > The URL in the IANA section is broken. It goes nowhere. Did you mean
> > http://grouper.ieee.org/groups/malware/malwg/Schema1.2/ ? If so, that
> > is not an XSD, either.
> >
> > If we have their approval, it would be easier to make the appendix the
> > normative reference for MMDEF.
> >
> > On Jul 5, 2013, at 4:01 AM, Takeshi Takahashi
> > <takeshi_takahashi@nict.go.jp> wrote:
> >
> > > Hello all,
> > >
> > > We've uploaded new version.
> > > Just after we submitted the previous version (version-07) of the
> > > draft, we've received email from the authors of MMDEF, and they
> > > kindly allowed us to copy and paste MMDEF's schema inside the draft
> > > (though they also preferred to paste only the web link instead of
> > > the schema itself if possible).
> > > So, this version includes the MMDEF 1.2's schema.
> > >
> > > Thank you.
> > > Take
> > >
> > >
> > >> -----Original Message-----
> > >> From: mile-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:mile-bounces@ietf.org] On
> > >> Behalf Of internet-drafts@ietf.org
> > >> Sent: Friday, July 5, 2013 4:58 PM
> > >> To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
> > >> Cc: mile@ietf.org
> > >> Subject: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-sci-08.txt
> > >>
> > >>
> > >> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> > >> directories.
> > >> This draft is a work item of the Managed Incident Lightweight
> > >> Exchange Working Group of the IETF.
> > >>
> > >> 	Title           : IODEF-extension for structured cybersecurity
> > >> information
> > >> 	Author(s)       : Takeshi Takahashi
> > >>                          Kent Landfield
> > >>                          Thomas Millar
> > >>                          Youki Kadobayashi
> > >> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-mile-sci-08.txt
> > >> 	Pages           : 45
> > >> 	Date            : 2013-07-05
> > >>
> > >> Abstract:
> > >>   This document extends the Incident Object Description Exchange
> Format
> > >>   (IODEF) defined in RFC 5070 [RFC5070] to exchange enriched
> > >>   cybersecurity information among cybersecurity entities and
> > facilitate
> > >>   their operations.  It provides the capability of embedding
> structured
> > >>   information, such as identifier- and XML-based information.
> > >>
> > >>
> > >> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mile-sci
> > >>
> > >> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> > >> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-mile-sci-08
> > >>
> > >> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > >> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mile-sci-08
> > >>
> > >>
> > >> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> > >> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
> > >>
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