Re: [Mip4] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5944 (3428)

Henrik Levkowetz <henrik@levkowetz.com> Wed, 12 December 2012 12:40 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Mip4] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5944 (3428)
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Hi,

I confirm this errata as accurate.


Best regards,

	Henrik

On 2012-12-12 13:22 RFC Errata System said:
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5944,
> "IP Mobility Support for IPv4, Revised".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5944&eid=3428
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Ville Nuorvala <ville.nuorvala@birdstep.com>
> 
> Section: 3.3
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
>       M        Minimal encapsulation.  If the 'M' bit is set, the mobile
> 
>                node requests that its home agent use minimal
> 
>                encapsulation [16] for datagrams tunneled to the mobile
> 
>                node.
> 
> 
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>       M        Minimal encapsulation.  If the 'M' bit is set, the mobile
> 
>                node requests that its home agent use minimal
> 
>                encapsulation [15] for datagrams tunneled to the mobile
> 
>                node.
> 
> 
> 
> Notes
> -----
> The citation points to the wrong reference:
> 
>    [16]  Plummer, D., "Ethernet Address Resolution Protocol: Or
> 
>          Converting Network Protocol Addresses to 48.bit Ethernet
> 
>          Address for Transmission on Ethernet Hardware", STD 37, RFC
> 
>          826, November 1982.
> 
> 
> 
> It should point to:
> 
>     [15]  Perkins, C., "Minimal Encapsulation within IP", RFC 2004,
> 
>          October 1996.
> 
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> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC5944 (draft-ietf-mip4-rfc3344bis-10)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : IP Mobility Support for IPv4, Revised
> Publication Date    : November 2010
> Author(s)           : C. Perkins, Ed.
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Mobility for IPv4
> Area                : Internet
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
>