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Re: [MLS] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture-09

Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com> Sun, 02 October 2022 02:13 UTC

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From: Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 01 Oct 2022 22:13:35 -0400
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Subject: Re: [MLS] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture-09
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Richard

Thanks for that!  I had assumed there was an implementation out there, and
was thinking you'd have an Appendix to mention those.

I submitted a github issue with some minor editorial nits for
consideration.

thanks

tun

On Sat, Oct 1, 2022 at 9:38 PM Richard Barnes <rlb@ipv.sx> wrote:

> Hey Tim,
>
> FYI, on your latter point: Draft versions of MLS are running in production
> in Webex and RingCentral.  There has been some early discussion of an
> “implementation considerations” draft that would capture some operational
> considerations.
>
> —Richard
>
> On Sat, Oct 1, 2022 at 20:22 Tim Wicinski via Datatracker <
> noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
>
>> Reviewer: Tim Wicinski
>> Review result: Has Nits
>>
>> I have been assigned to review this document on behalf of the OPS DIR.
>>
>> I feel the document is ready with Nits.
>>
>> The document is well written, though I found a few gramatical issues I
>> can share
>> with the authors.
>>
>> The architecture is described in detail, and does discuss the operational
>> requirements of deploying this.  However, the document does not mention
>> if there has been any implementations built.  From an operational point
>> of view,
>> that would be useful in determining functionality.
>>
>>
>>
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