Re: [MLS] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture-09

Richard Barnes <rlb@ipv.sx> Sun, 02 October 2022 01:38 UTC

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From: Richard Barnes <rlb@ipv.sx>
Date: Sat, 01 Oct 2022 21:38:30 -0400
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Subject: Re: [MLS] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture-09
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Hey Tim,

FYI, on your latter point: Draft versions of MLS are running in production
in Webex and RingCentral.  There has been some early discussion of an
“implementation considerations” draft that would capture some operational
considerations.

—Richard

On Sat, Oct 1, 2022 at 20:22 Tim Wicinski via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
wrote:

> Reviewer: Tim Wicinski
> Review result: Has Nits
>
> I have been assigned to review this document on behalf of the OPS DIR.
>
> I feel the document is ready with Nits.
>
> The document is well written, though I found a few gramatical issues I can
> share
> with the authors.
>
> The architecture is described in detail, and does discuss the operational
> requirements of deploying this.  However, the document does not mention
> if there has been any implementations built.  From an operational point of
> view,
> that would be useful in determining functionality.
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