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Re: [MMUSIC] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-20.txt

Paul Kyzivat <paul.kyzivat@comcast.net> Thu, 22 June 2017 19:16 UTC

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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-20.txt
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One thing you missed in the ABNF def of media-description:

s/*attribute-fields/*attribute-field/

Otherwise looks good.

	Thanks,
	Paul

On 6/21/17 7:39 PM, Ali C. Begen wrote:
> Hi Paul
> 
> Thanks for catching the error. It is fixed and submitted now.
> 
> -acbegen
> 
> On Mon, Jun 19, 2017 at 6:02 PM, Paul Kyzivat <paul.kyzivat@comcast.net 
> <mailto:paul.kyzivat@comcast.net>> wrote:
> 
>     Hi Ali,
> 
>     On 6/16/17 6:32 PM, Ali C. Begen wrote:
> 
>         Hi everyone
> 
>         There have been some comments on and off the list regarding the
>         4566bis draft and with this update, I am hoping that I made all
>         the changed asked for. There were a few errors that were taken
>         care of, some ABNF syntax has been improved, references have
>         been updated, etc.
> 
>         https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-18&url2=draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-19
>         <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-18&url2=draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-19>
> 
>         Please check whether you have outstanding issues or not. I saw
>         that the chairs updated the milestone for this draft, and from
>         my perspective, the draft is ready to go to WGLC.
> 
> 
>     I like the change to the grammar that moves the notation for
>     optionality/repetition of individual fields from the definition of
>     those fields to the overall definition of the session-description:
> 
>         session-description = proto-version
>                               origin-field
>                               session-name-field
>                               [information-field]
>                               [uri-field]
>                               *email-fields
>                               *phone-fields
>                               [connection-field]
>                               *bandwidth-fields
>                               1*time-fields
>                               [key-field]
>                               *attribute-fields
>                               *media-descriptions
> 
>     However, this change induced a bug in the definition of
>     media-descriptions:
> 
>         media-descriptions =  media-field
>                               information-field
>                               *connection-field
>                               bandwidth-fields
>                               key-field
>                               attribute-fields
> 
>     This needs the same changes made to session-description. So this
>     needs to be changed to:
> 
>         media-descriptions =  media-field
>                               [information-field]
>                               *connection-field
>                               *bandwidth-fields
>                               [key-field]
>                               *attribute-fields
> 
>     Also this change does result in some very odd naming, where the
>     names of some fields are plural but now ought to be singular. These
>     ought to be fixed. Specifically:
> 
>     email-fields => email-field
>     phone-fields => phone-field
>     bandwidth-fields => bandwidth-field
>     time-fields => time-field
>     attribute-fields => attribute-field
>     media-descriptions => media-description
> 
>     Otherwise the new version seems good to me.
> 
>              Thanks,
>              Paul
> 
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