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Re: [MMUSIC] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-19.txt

"Ali C. Begen" <ali.begen@networked.media> Wed, 21 June 2017 23:39 UTC

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From: "Ali C. Begen" <ali.begen@networked.media>
Date: Thu, 22 Jun 2017 02:39:34 +0300
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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-19.txt
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Hi Paul

Thanks for catching the error. It is fixed and submitted now.

-acbegen

On Mon, Jun 19, 2017 at 6:02 PM, Paul Kyzivat <paul.kyzivat@comcast.net>
wrote:

> Hi Ali,
>
> On 6/16/17 6:32 PM, Ali C. Begen wrote:
>
>> Hi everyone
>>
>> There have been some comments on and off the list regarding the 4566bis
>> draft and with this update, I am hoping that I made all the changed asked
>> for. There were a few errors that were taken care of, some ABNF syntax has
>> been improved, references have been updated, etc.
>>
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566b
>> is-18&url2=draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-19
>>
>> Please check whether you have outstanding issues or not. I saw that the
>> chairs updated the milestone for this draft, and from my perspective, the
>> draft is ready to go to WGLC.
>>
>
> I like the change to the grammar that moves the notation for
> optionality/repetition of individual fields from the definition of those
> fields to the overall definition of the session-description:
>
>    session-description = proto-version
>                          origin-field
>                          session-name-field
>                          [information-field]
>                          [uri-field]
>                          *email-fields
>                          *phone-fields
>                          [connection-field]
>                          *bandwidth-fields
>                          1*time-fields
>                          [key-field]
>                          *attribute-fields
>                          *media-descriptions
>
> However, this change induced a bug in the definition of media-descriptions:
>
>    media-descriptions =  media-field
>                          information-field
>                          *connection-field
>                          bandwidth-fields
>                          key-field
>                          attribute-fields
>
> This needs the same changes made to session-description. So this needs to
> be changed to:
>
>    media-descriptions =  media-field
>                          [information-field]
>                          *connection-field
>                          *bandwidth-fields
>                          [key-field]
>                          *attribute-fields
>
> Also this change does result in some very odd naming, where the names of
> some fields are plural but now ought to be singular. These ought to be
> fixed. Specifically:
>
> email-fields => email-field
> phone-fields => phone-field
> bandwidth-fields => bandwidth-field
> time-fields => time-field
> attribute-fields => attribute-field
> media-descriptions => media-description
>
> Otherwise the new version seems good to me.
>
>         Thanks,
>         Paul
>
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