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Roman Shpount <roman@telurix.com> Mon, 03 June 2019 20:17 UTC

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Date: Mon, 03 Jun 2019 16:17:17 -0400
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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-31.txt
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Hi Suhas,

I think there is an error introduced in this version. Old language was

It indicates that the offer arrived with a default destination for a media
component that didn't have a corresponding candidate attribute.

New language:

It indicates that the *offerer* arrived with a default destination for a
media component that didn't have a corresponding candidate attribute.

Since this language talks about session description (offer), old language
was correct. The offerer (an ICE agent) did not actually arrive anywhere.

If you want, you can make this more clear by changing this sentence to the
following:

It indicates, to the offerer, that the other party received a session
description with a default destination for a media component that didn't
have a corresponding candidate attribute.

Regards,
_____________
Roman Shpount


On Sun, Jun 2, 2019 at 7:18 AM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Multiparty Multimedia Session Control WG
> of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Session Description Protocol (SDP) Offer/Answer
> procedures for Interactive Connectivity Establishment (ICE)
>         Authors         : Marc Petit-Huguenin
>                           Suhas Nandakumar
>                           Ari Keranen
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-31.txt
>         Pages           : 42
>         Date            : 2019-06-02
>
> Abstract:
>    This document describes Session Description Protocol (SDP) Offer/
>    Answer procedures for carrying out Interactive Connectivity
>    Establishment (ICE) between the agents.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-31
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-31
>
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