Re: [MMUSIC] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-28: (with COMMENT)

[Adam Roach <[e-mail]>]

On 8/23/17 04:38, Christer Holmberg wrote:
>
>> I would think the long-form title of this document should include "TLS,"
>> to
>> reflect that it also contains TLS-related procedures.
> The issue is that the document doesn¹t really define the O/A procedures
> for TLS. It simply adds the usage of the tls-id attribute to the existing
> procedures defined elsewhere.

Right, so make that clear. I note that simply adding "and Identification 
of TLS Connections" to the end is ambiguous (since it makes it sound 
like it defines O/A for TLS), but you can fix this by reversing the 
existing title; e.g., something like: "Establishing Datagram Transport 
Layer Security (DTLS) Using the Session Description Protocol (SDP) 
Offer/Answer Mechanism and Identification of Transport Layer Security 
(TLS) Connections in SDP"

/a